Itz way too loooooong.. since I blogged...
As most of you know , I only blog those feeling/thoughts which makes my heads up and not everything i see/undergo !!
Here is a gist of my joy that I underwent when I landed on a heavenly place....
Am not sure why I make my poems rhyme... though I know it an old trend to do so...
For some reason, I want my verse to be musical rather than a bunch of paragraphs...
Provided, conveying my thoughts strongly ++ sounding it rhyme makes my job even tougher
here I have attempted to rhyme all 4 lines in a para... Rhyme Scheme : aaaa
This Rhyme Scheme make my work tougher ! :)
I tried my best to depict the landscape captured by my eye-lens and the brighter side of the life as well. I have, indeed, attempted to associate the former with the later, in the 2nd half of my verse... :)
Cheers... Happy Reading
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Harmonizing.....
The magnificently glorious lush green
Lake water beside is crystal clean
Tumors run away from my spleen
Taking me back to my Thirteen
A lady with golden and blue attire
Water is as bright as blue sapphire
Shone above is the golden red fire
Tharshing the Unease by the pure air that I insipre
Rays of the sun makes the water sparkle
Like million diamond miracle
Simulating the powers of alchemical
A visible Sign with an abstracting allegorical
Clouds near the sun are in patches
Fastening the Hydrogen with million latches
Little black ducks move around in batches
It is the invisble emotional ties that attaches
Under the clear blue wide vast matter
Blackies jump with a noisy Splatter
into the well-nigh Pure Water
causing the polar covalent bond to shatter
Rolling into the water like Black pearls
Casuing small water swirls
Twisting like ringlets of blonde hair curls
Thrusting under the water with great hurls
Silver fishes rapidly diving out
Looking like sudden water sprout
Ducks archerying at them as clout
For their fresh delicous salmonid trout
Under the big shady tree
Muching the austrian winter pea
Peace running at its highest degree
Truly enjoying the feeling of 'No Worry'
Blowing wind on my face
With a soothing soft pace
Discharging the mind from all the maze
Comforting myself with my elbow for a brace
Strong blowing wind at times
Clearing the branches with noisy chimes
Beam of ray falls on me and shines
For a second, I glow like exploding mines
Supremely tranquil and silent
Savoring the complete absense of the voilent
Enjoying the abundant joy of affluent
Acting against abasement
Life is as beautiful as blue sapphire lake
With both joy, as delicious as plumped japanese cake
and Sorrow as sneaky as, banded sand snake
LIFE is the wide vast reflecting blue lake
HOPE is the shining golden sun
Surrounded by the hot grey gas in dun
FAITH gives all the worlds power in ONE
Sparkling like the Diamonds in ton
Clear sky is the thoughts in clarity
Scattered clouds depicting the lack of prosperity
Shady big huge tree like our career with solidarity
Lying relaxed under it with gleeful hilarity
Black pearl ducks are the Problems that roll
Water that the duck splashes are the troubles that strolls
Jumping sliver fishes are the Opportunity in secret parole
Which we always wish to control
Blowing wind are the people you come across
Strong blowing winds are your LOVED ones who cross
They make you glow and gloss
Excepting no gain or loss
Life is a vicious circle
The way you look at it can make it a miracle
I see Life as a scenic Nonfictional article
With versatile frames moving in the very lifecycle
Cheers
Sangeetha :)
Labels: Harmonizing
14 Comments:
Nice one...nice phrases and verses...good job.. I never that there is another great side for an IT Geek!!!
-- Subbiah Lakshmanan
its great.. ~: moreover everybody would have told ths same thing.. ~: i am not a good critic .. neways..
¬ rajkumar
Nee nalla pattu eluthura..but enakku satyama onnumae puriyala...nangha ellam nalu varthai english la padikrathae periya vishayam pa......
- Vijayprakash Santhanakrishnan,
good poetry....its been quiet a while since i read one
- Vineet
it was awesome.. really super
frankly speaking,i can understand the context but not word by word
~~~ Praveenkumar
its a nice piece .. my fav line is "Scattered clouds depicting the lack of prosperity" .
carry on the good work ..looking fwd to more lines from you
ha ha ha
Sangee really nice talent in u..y in blogs move forward n b known...
Best match and a combo wit ur fotos n ur lines.
I just can't stop saying .. woow woow and woowwwwwww..
I was wondering how do you get these words i guess that's the natural talent in you... Really supurb & amazing...!!
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பிளாக் லில் தொடர்ந்து எழுத வாழ்த்துகள்..
புத்தகம் நெய்வேலி சென்ற போது ரேவதி அவர்களின் மூலம்
கிடைத்தது........
Beautiful! :)
Really good one.. but it seems ur target audience are the 'A' center (as they call in Cinema).. so many words to google to find its meanings.. sometimes this may bring down the richness of your contents.. but that was really good one.. why dont you try writing something more simpler (i mean to the saamanya makkal) so that you can have a wide reach and more ppl can appreciate it.. I understand your in the land where English was born..but it can be little indianized.. :)
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